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Friday, July 14, 2023

Amelie Elmquist-Forrester - The First Day

Amelie stood by her window in the antechamber of the wing she occupied in the Forrester mansion. It was a spacious room, cold and white, but well-lit and fashionably appointed.

She stood at the window watching her father, Colonel Forrester, as he conducted a prolonged interview of a poorly dressed young man in the garden below her.

There was something about the young man that troubled her, and it wasn’t just because he was tall and handsome, and disheveled.

Amelie could not peel away from the perch where she concealed herself behind the long white curtains, wishing more than anything that she could hear the conservation taking place between them.

She knew that the household staff were preparing a room for him in the guest quarters of her father’s wing at that very moment, though she did not hear of it until a few minutes prior to his arrival.

Nils, their butler, had kept the information from the staff and from her, though he had probably known for some days that her father intended to keep the boy as their guest for a term of days, possibly longer.

Amelie positively loathed those kinds of secrets. She felt that they were disruptive, and not just to her. They were disruptive to the staff as well.

She had been feeling out-of-control lately, and such disruptive secrets would only contribute to that.

Amelie had managed to squeeze a little information from Nils about the shabby-boy and what he would be doing at the mansion; Nils had told her that his name was Johnny Holiday, that he worked for the Saint Anthony Star, the evening paper, that he was an aspiring journalist and a student at the University of Saint Thomas, across the river in Pig’s Eye.

Nils said that her father had enjoined him to do some research, and perhaps write a story concerning Amelie’s husband, Bjorn Elmquist, who had gone missing a few months earlier.

Amelie had begun to shake, slightly, when the old butler told her that.

Nils told her that it was his understanding, that the Colonel, on account of his fondness for her husband, and believing he may never return, wanted something tangible to remember him by, a piece of prose to capture the essence of the man and remind him of their time together.

Amelie found Nils’ explanation to be preposterous.

She felt threatened by the prospect of this boy getting into her business…it was more than just disruptive, it was menacing.

However, Amelie knew her father was obsessed with stories, he believed narrative had a mystical quality, the way some aboriginal tribes believed that photographing a person could steal their soul or rob them of their essence, as the renowned anthropologist Margaret Meade had reported.

Her father believed that stories could do the same thing, like the ancient people whose singular ambition was to be remembered in song and have their deeds recorded in sagas and epic poetry, to be retold throughout the ages.

Ultimately, Amelie suspected that her father was not satisfied with the notion that Bjorn had decided to leave her without a good reason, and without saying goodbye to anyone…including him.

The Colonel wanted to find out why he had gone and he wanted someone who was unknown to both his friends and enemies to carry out the inquiry.

            Perhaps he would get a good story out of the investigation, she concluded, but that would just be sauce for the plum…so to speak.

Amelie was nervous, and shaky, and it was getting worse by the minute

She didn’t want anyone asking questions about her marriage. Bjorn was gone, and her father was right, he would not be coming back.

Amelie was certain of it, and she wanted her father to accept it and move on.

Bjorn would never be heard from again.

She watched them drinking coffee, while she-herself quaffed a tumbler of strong brown liquor; she needed it she told herself…she always needed it, to settle her nerves and prepare her for her own interview with the aspiring journalist, which she intended to conduct just as soon as her father was done with him.

Amelie was determined to discover his purpose.

Nils would bring him to her shortly and she would put his heels in the fire.

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Friday, June 23, 2023

Captain Royce Bivens, ROTC, University of Saint Thomas - The First Day

Captain Royce Bivens was preparing for his senior year at the University of Saint Thomas. He was from an up-and-coming family in the capital city, Pig’s Eye, Minnesota.

His mother and father lived about a mile away from campus in a small home on Summit Avenue. His father owned a hardware store and his mother was a parish leader at Saint Thomas Moore Cathedral.

The Bivens were not a wealthy family, but they were squarely positioned in what was  coming to be known as America’s “middle class.” They were teetotalers, with a moral and ethical view of the world that was practically Calvinist despite their deeply Catholic roots; they were puritanical.

Bivens took pride in his ROTC training. Prior to his admission to St. Thomas he had attended Cretin-Derham Hall and had participated in the Junior ROTC. He had dreamed of attending West Point, believing in his heart that he was better than his peers at everything they were called them to do; drills and marches, physical fitness…and most importantly, following orders.

He was the exemplification of duty, what he lacked in imagination he made up for in consistency.

He was like a dog with bone.

Bivens excelled at everything that took place in the martial sphere of his studies; at everything else he was a B student…at best.

He consistently failed to understand his academic limitations.

He could write an excellent report, but not an essay.

Bivens was disciplined, ardently disciplined; in his heart he believed that following procedures to the letter was the signal mark of a good soldier, and for his adherence to this principle he had been promoted to Captain, but he was wrong about one very important thing. The ROTC program at the university was not training him to be a soldier, it was grooming him for leadership, for a commission in the Army, and he had been counseled that command called for something more than the simple motivation to do as you are told.

In fact, Bivens had been told this many times. Such statements had appeared with regularity on his evaluations, and he consistently struggled to recognize their importance or how he could change himself in response to that criticism.

On this night however, he had been convinced by some of the fellows from his squad to take a trip down Lake Street. They wanted to drive down the strip, see the nightlife, have a drink in a bar. Bivens was reluctant at first, but he was loathe to set himself apart from the group.

He thought about the constant critique of his character that his superiors leveled at him, and he decided that he should have some fun, join his friends, experience something of the world, do the unexpected.

Once Bivens made up his mind he would not be deterred, and so when the rain began to fall in heavy sheets and some of the boys wanted to cancel their plans, he pushed them forward.

His mind was fixed and he would have gone alone that night if no-one would have joined him, but his boldness encouraged the squad to follow.

Earlier, their braggadocio had overwhelmed his reticence, now his overwhelmed theirs.

Together they crossed the Mississippi, going over the Lake Street bridge, driving west down its length. They were headed toward Nicollet Park where the Miller’s played.

The bar was called the Round-Up, and the brother of one of the boys in the squad, Lieutenant Kaplan, worked there. This meant that when they arrived they were treated like family, and greeted warmly by the owner and his wife.

Royce liked that, it made him feel comfortable.

They were gathered at a table by the door, drinking beer and whiskey, laughing and talking about the working-girls they had seen on the corner. They were wondering out loud, and loudly about how much it would cost to spend an hour with one of them, blushing and guffawing at the thought of it, like young men without any real experience of women do, when there was a sudden commotion, and a fight ensued.

A group of men, including the owner of the bar and Kaplan’s brother, were attempting to push a man of gargantuan stature out the door.

Bivens had not seen the altercation break-out, but he understood instinctively who was in the right…the owner of the establishment, and though it chilled him to the core to join the mayhem, he mastered his fear and mustered his squad.

They got up from their chairs and joined the fray and helped push the giant out the door, knowing that without his squad, the other men could not succeed.

Royce stood in the doorway and watched the huge-man stumble, he fell against a parked car, and appeared to cut his jaw, though after a second look Royce thought he must have imagined it.

He watched the giant recover his footing, and watched Tom Kaplan, his lieutenant’s brother, go outside in his rubber apron to return the man’s hat to him, and present him with his bill.

He watched as the gargantuan looked toward the sky and with a roar of maniacal laughter appeared to call down a bolt of lightning; and he watched as rainbows danced in the giant’s glass eye, he watched as the bolt of white fire struck Tom Kaplan dead.

A wave of horror passed through the people on the street, a dwarf brushed past Royce’s leg on his way out the door.

The gargantuan began to run down Lake Street in the heavy rain.

Two police who had been walking the beat, ran after him.

Then Bivens noticed something that surprised him.

He saw Johnny Holiday, a guy that he had personally drummed out of the ROTC, and subsequently from the University; he saw Johnny following behind the giant, running ahead of the police, giving chase like he had reason to.

He saw Lt. Kaplan run to his brother, sobbing and screaming. Bivens scratched his chin, he felt confused. The rest of the squad was standing around in shock, looking to him, their captain, for a signal as to what to do.

Bivens collected his wits and went out to his friend, he knelt with him beside the body of his fallen brother laying in a puddle of water.

He put his hand on the man’s shoulder and said to him: “Let’s go call your ma.” 


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